Today we had to write about the holidays and I chose this because this is my favorite part and I really want to share it with yous.
On the first week of the holidays I went to my Nan's house for 6 days. On the first day me and my siblings unpacked our bags and made our beds and went to sleep we got there around 10:00pm. When we woke up we had some breakfast and then went to go fishing I caught 2 snapper. On the rest of the days we went to Ninety mile beach to go and get some Toheroa. On the last day my parents came up to pick us up and then we went straight to my sisters house in Ruawai. In Ruawai we went horse riding, Easter egg hunting and Baby shopping. On the second week I went to my other Nan's house she lives on a farm with heaps of animals I didn't really do much up there just going with my papa to the hospital every second day for his dialysis and adventuring around in the bushes with my cousin Mereana. For the rest of the holidays I went back home and went to go spend some time at my friends house.
Taylor, I liked hearing about your holiday in Pukenui and Ruawai. You must have been tired that day and you must have had a great catch in the morning. By the way my name is Yazmin and I am a Year 5 student at Paihia School. Was Ninety Mile Beach fun? Was it fun at your Aunty’s house because it sounded amazing all I do is go to my Mum’s work!!! You must have had heaps of fun with your cousin as well. You must have had fun at your friends house. It must have been a great holidays hope to see you again soon Yazmin.
ReplyDeleteHi Taylor My name is Zaapharj, I liked your story about your holiday at Pukenui and Ruawai. I am a year 5 student at Paihia school and I’m also nine years old. Was Ninety Mile Beach fun? Your trip sounded like you had a great time spending time with your family and others. I like the way you layed out your punctuation in the right spot but could you put more punctuation?
ReplyDeleteHi Taylor my name is Mikaire and I am a year 6 at Paihia School. I read your post about your holiday. You brought me back to when I went to my anties and got stuck there for an extra week. I like how you said what you did and how long you were there. What was your favorite thing that you did.?
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