This is definitely a tragedy that should not have happened in our country, it shouldn't happen anywhere! You have shown some nice thought and feeling in this piece as well as identifying the facts. Good work.
Kia ora Taylor, my name is Zhynaliyah and I am a year 8 student from Paihia School. I really like how much you care about the people who passed away in Christchurch. This reminds me of the bank robbery we had and because of the that we had a really long lock down. Maybe next time if you are going to put a capital letter make sure there is a full stop before it. Quick question have you been to Christchurch before? Otherwise, keep up the good work!
Hi Taylor my name is Brisa I am a Year 5 student and I go to Paihia School. It’s really sad that they even HAD stuff like that.For someone like you to write about it is really caring for the ones that passed. Your really smart to know everything about that day. Good on you and keep up the good work!
Hi Taylor, it’s Teah from Paihia School. I was upset to hear about it as well. Things like that don’t happen often in New Zealand. It's heartbreaking that a 3 year old was there it was probably terrifying although the 3 year old probably didn’t even know what was going on. What did you think when you first heard it was in New Zealand?
This is definitely a tragedy that should not have happened in our country, it shouldn't happen anywhere! You have shown some nice thought and feeling in this piece as well as identifying the facts. Good work.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Taylor, my name is Zhynaliyah and I am a year 8 student from Paihia School. I really like how much you care about the people who passed away in Christchurch. This reminds me of the bank robbery we had and because of the that we had a really long lock down. Maybe next time if you are going to put a capital letter make sure there is a full stop before it. Quick question have you been to Christchurch before? Otherwise, keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHi Taylor my name is Brisa I am a Year 5 student and I go to Paihia School. It’s really sad that they even HAD stuff like that.For someone like you to write about it is really caring for the ones that passed. Your really smart to know everything about that day. Good on you and keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHi Taylor, it’s Teah from Paihia School. I was upset to hear about it as well. Things like that don’t happen often in New Zealand. It's heartbreaking that a 3 year old was there it was probably terrifying although the 3 year old probably didn’t even know what was going on. What did you think when you first heard it was in New Zealand?
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